Here’s the rough draft of an essay I just pounded out. If anyone can give me any tips I’d love it. It’s on the Mass Effect Trilogy and its music so there are spoilers.
Dogs that are having a worse hair day than you are.
There is a sea monster in the pond!
#borzoi #koira #sighthound #seamonster #dog
coolelsen said: So Charlie. I've been thinking. Want to be friends?
"I am…unsure where, you heard the word, Elsen, but it is no title. It is a creature, a being built for labor. I am no Elsen. I am. A human. No longer, a f-f-freak, I am in law enforcement.” He loosens his tie, sweating even with the chill of night surrounding them. He undoes the top button of his shirt, trying to calm down, he felt suffocated. Couldn’t b r e a t h e.
"I swear, Charlie, there may be other men and women found here… but you, well, you’re my greatest c-comfort. You’re always here. Th-thank you, for k-keeping me sane…w-wait. Eat rocks?" He stopped frantically searching scripture out of pure confusion. "Eat…rocks? H-has just, sitting in a chair w-watching cheap porn, made him forget D-Darwinism? I thought it was bad with, a large predator, with excess F-FLUFF, and one eye. But. Moles, eating… rocks? Rocks. Eating rocks." To put it simply, the human was befuddled. “This man has made, a mockery, of evolution. How the bleeding f*** do they survive eating ROCKS.” He was trying to forget the bit about dogs eating gemstones. How the f*** did this magician think the world worked? Did he ever get anything beyond a third grade education? Bleeding idiot.
ohhhhh… a conssstruct… I sssee now…
odd that I keep anyone sssane… when a mere glanssse at me ssstripsss the sssanity from all who sssee me…
hssshssshsss… you ssseem to think thessse islandsss follow the sssame natural lawsss asss the flower you came from… therein liesss your missstake… if thessse islandsss were like your world then captivesss wouldn’t reawaken after death…
doesss thisss bible of yoursss have anything to do with eassster?
Hahaha this rough draft is absolute crap and I have no idea what the hell I’m doing. I don’t even get what I’m supposed to be writing about. First college paper and I’m already falling apart.
all rough drafts are crap
nobody knows what they’re supposed to be writing about
just bullshit the rough draft, have a drink or a break or a snack, then come back to it. getting your ideas down is the most important part of the rough.
Puppies make everyone happy~
Page 1 of 319